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Feedback Script Screen
Actionable feedback on your script or screenplay from a top professional writer in your chosen field. We offer expert advice for emerging screenwriters and playwrights. Written a draft and feeling stuck? Get feedback from writers produced at the highest level in both screen and theatre. We will give you the tips and tools to turn make your work unignorable to producers and production houses.
"Fanatastic! I feel as if I were sick and went to a doctor, who has correctly diagnosed me and prescribed a cure. I am already planning the next draft, based on the feedback! Every note was useful. Every note provided suggestions and solutions. And all of the feedback was delivered with real care"
(John Virgil)
Who we are
Feedback Script Screen exists to offer writers advice to get their work to a place where it becomes ‘un-ignorable’. The sole purpose of the company is to help writers get to a place where their work is ready for production.
EVERY reader will be a professional in your chosen genre. Our readers have been produced by Nextflix, BBC TV, Sky, The National Theatre, Old Vic Theatre and many more. EVERY reader has more than two produced works in their field and no less than 10 years experience.
We can’t guarantee that your work will be produced. But we can guarantee that your work will be read experienced writers, all of whom know what it takes to get a script ready for production. We can guarantee that you will get the best advice possible. We can guarantee that your work will be treated with care and respect. We can guarantee that you will have the best working minds, as an ally, when you send us your work. We want to maximize the potential of your idea and get you to the place where you feel ready to press send!
We offer extensive feedback, designed to make your work attractive to potential producers. We also offer mentorships, teaching sessions and 1 on 1 tutorials, to help you develop your craft.
Testimonials
I could not have asked for a better, or more complete or more helpful review. The review was well written, positive inapproach and specific. I would highly recommend this review service. (Ania D)
My reader was incisive, informative, and a cornucopia of useful knowledge. A master of their craft. Thank you. (Kazim Hassan)
I felt like the reader understood what this story needs to be. The feedback showed me where I had missed the mark. But also showed me how I could fix it. Very actionable feedback. Superb!
(Genevieve O'Hara)
Very good notes. I was given great advice and can see how changing things, according to that advice, will greatly impove the salability of my project. It was so cleaer to see that he/she had read my screenplay very carefully. (Kenny Langton)
What we do
Screen
Writing your television pilot? Your script will be read by a writer, with a minimum of two shows produced by major TV networks/streaming sites eg BBC TV, Netflix, Apple, Prime.
Film
You will receive the highest quality feedback from an award winning reader, with a minimum of two features in production.
Theatre
Writing your theatre play? Receive the highest quality feedback from a readers whose plays have been produced in the West End, Broadway, the National Theatre or The Old Vic Theatre.
Why we do it
Because it's so hard to get quality feedback!
There are many competitors who are offering false hope. Many are looking to retain customers – to have you keep sending in work and parting with money. We know how many competitions employ readers to offer token feedback, with no real aim of helping the writer. Many of these sites employ readers who have never had work produced, never been involved in production and have very little understanding of what it takes to write a script that stands a chance of being picked up.
Our writers have the experience of working in the industry and having their work produced at the highest level... We understand that a writer with potential knows the answers… they just haven’t found them (yet). Our writers are experienced enough to know, that the right sort of question, or provocation, can unlock the potential of a script and give the writer the confidence to go and complete that work and ‘press send’!
Choose your service and a member of our team will contact you with news of your designated reader and delivery time. Max wait for feedback is 14 days. Once you purchse, we will request your latest draft for our reader to read.
Any questions, please get in touch!
How do I get my feedback?
Send us your script/screenplay at [email protected] Select your feedback service below. We will then confirm the delivery date for your feedback. This will be no more than 14 days from your payment receipt.
Feature Film (standard)
Kick-start creating your basic website.
$115
2000 words of feedback
Feedback delivered by a professionalScreenwriter
Thoughts on structure, dialogue, character and theme
Feature Film (extra)
For individuals working on bigger websites.
$190
4000 of feedback
Feedback delivered by a professional screenwriter
Thoughts on structure, dialogue, character and theme
Page by page, extensive analysis
Television Pilot/single episode
For professionals and teams working on big websites.
$100
1800 words of feedback
Feedback delivered by a professional screenwriter
Thoughts on structure, dialogue, character and theme
Theatre Script (one act)
$90
1800 words of feedback
Feedback delivered by a professional Playwright
Thoughts on dialogue, structure, character and theme
Theatre Script (over 55 pages)
$120
2000 words of feedback
Feedback delivered by a professional Playwright
Thoughts on dialogue, structure, character and theme
Mentor to script
$950
Four 1 on 1 zoom calls over 6 weeks.
Four opportunities to receive (approx.) 1000 words of feedback.
Four 45 minute zoom calls to discuss your work. You will be paired with a writer with at least two professional credits in your designated field
Testimonials
This reader undoubtedly knows his/her way around a screenplay., understanding what needs to be on the page and what needs to be seen on screen. a first rate analysis and report.
(Lyrah)
Phenomenal advice, as always. Really good structural and sparked loads of ideas on how to implement serious change. I will, no doubt, come back again, after this round of notes
(A.J. Feeley)
Very encouraging. A really good mix of high level, specific, action items. Thie feedback triggered my imagination and led to exciting solutions that will improve my characters and story. Thank you!
(Miloh)
FAQ
Don't worry, we got you. Here are some answers for your questions.
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Our readers will focus on the main areas to develop - structure, charactierisation, journey of change, form, genre, dialogue and dramatic action. Notes will begin with an overview of the major areas to focus on. Detailed (specific examples) page refs will follow. We will also provide an 'action plan' with how to move forward with the script/screenplay.
If you have any further questions, please just drop us a line!
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